Week 33 | Your favourite scene

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Week 33

I can’t reveal my actual favourite scene from The Elder Throne because it holds all manner of major spoilers. Likewise, so does my second favourite scene. So, what you’re getting from me today is my third favourite scene – still worthy, just not at the top.

This following scene happens in the latter half of the book, just before Mabon Festival. Mabon is hailed as a peace festival between the Seelie and UnSeelie, which is why a group of UnSeelie faeries cross the border every year in order to celebrate with the Seelie. This is the first time Anna will catch a glimpse of them and her would-be step-mother, Janus Atropa.

This scene is also the one I can picture most vividly in my head. Hopefully I have done a suitable job of translating it into words but, if not – that’s what edits are for, right, S.E.Berrow?

Here’s an extract…


Chapter 17: The UnSeelie Arrive


A huge crowd had gathered by the main road.

“What’s going on?” she asked, standing on her tiptoes. She craned her neck to see what everyone was looking at, until Spindle grabbed her around the waist and hoisted her into the air in a weird, acrobatic hug. She almost protested at being treated like a toddler, but then she saw what the crowd was watching.

A stream of people poured from the UnSeen Road, a shock of black, white and red against the natural greenery of the hill. A woman beside them gasped, grabbing her small son and leaving swiftly. A few others with young children had a similar idea and, as the crowd parted in front of her, Spindle’s grip slipped and she slid to the ground. Those who hadn’t left pressed forward, and she found herself thrust to the front, just as the first visitor reached the plaza.

It was a child, about her height and dressed in a shift made entirely from autumn leaves. Her skin was pale, with hair as pure white and wild like Spindle’s. She looked back at her cousin, whose eyes widened, and Anna was suddenly aware of a dark shape at the corner of her eye. She yelped, turning to find the curious child inches away. The top half of her face was painted black, tapering down to a sharp point over her lips. From the blackness glowed two fiery orange eyes like dying embers. The child laughed, exposing sharp, needle-like teeth, and was swept away by the churning stream of UnSeelie.

By this time, Bracken had forced his way through the crowd and was standing next to her, hand on his sword, but she was too distracted to care about him.

The UnSeelie were unlike anything she’d seen, mesmerising and primal. Her heart hammered against her ribcage as more swept by, paying her no heed nor even a glance.

A giant, barrel-chested creature with impossibly wide antlers strode confidently down the path, made from twigs and branches instead of skin and bone. Next to him was a thickset, green-skinned troll with bright orange hair and curling goat horns, who wore a tattered brown jerkin and a string of baby teeth around his neck.

Tall women, cloaked and veiled in the purest white, drifted beside bare-chested men whose black-charred skin cracked, exposing flames that licked their flesh as they walked. And dotted through the crowd were shadowy figures in black, wearing metal masks that hid their faces completely. One looked her way and Bracken put his hand on her shoulder.

“All UnSeelie warriors,” he muttered. “That’s unusual.”

“What, even the children are warriors?” Anna asked, and he frowned at her.

“What children?”

“The one with the painted face, earlier.”

“That wasn’t a child.”

“Oh.” She decided she didn’t want to ask anymore.

Spindle gripped her hand, openly pointing at the crowd.

“You see the masks? Those ones are the Three Families. Atropas, Blackwoods and Vales. They’re really important, like UnSeelie royalty – ”

“Like the Mafia,” Anna said, and Spindle looked blank. Priya shot her a thumbs-up.

The procession suddenly halted, and silence fell across the crowd. Anna felt a sharp, odd sense of relief as Commander Valerian stood in front of the UnSeelie, with two dozen Seelie Warriors at his back. A tall woman, just a little shorter than him, emerged from the strange throng. She wore all black, with a silver cloak and a black mask shaped like a vulture with horns. If Commander Valerian was disturbed by her appearance, he didn’t show it.

“Commander Atropa,” he greeted, in a low, polite voice. “Hail and well met.”

“Hail and well met, Commander Valerian,” the woman replied. She reached up with a gloved hand to remove her mask.

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Week 32 | What is your protagonist’s biggest weakness?

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Week 32


anna1Without a doubt, Anna Squire’s biggest weakness is her naivete.

As the heroine of The Elder Throne, Anna obviously has a lot of strengths: she’s compassionate, determined and generally well liked, and she doesn’t like bullies or anyone exploiting others for personal gain. In relation to this, she is also quickly loyal to those who she feels empathy for, and she is naturally kind. For example, when Anna, as a fish out of water, is offered the chance to be accepted by a popular and influential noble fae family, the Goodfellows, she instead sticks with the self-confessed outsider, Priya, because she recognises Priya is being bullied and therefore needs a friend.

However, as good as these intentions and actions are, they are not based on a fair, impartial knowledge. They’re based on Anna’s instincts – and Anna’s instincts aren’t always right. This is because she is both naive and strong-minded, both traits that can be attributed to her parents and her upbringing.

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Week 31 | Book recommendations | Fans of your book might also enjoy

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Week 31

I like to read a lot of children’s books and there are so many of different genres that I’d love to recommend. I suppose, in order to recommend books that share commonalities with The Elder Throne, I’d have to break down what those commonalities might be. Here goes…

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Week 30 | Describe (or show) your book’s ideal cover

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Week 30

My book’s cover has been through several evolutions and I’m still not quite sure I’ve settled on the right one. Covers are so important, aren’t they? Anyone who says ‘don’t judge a book by its cover’ has clearly never been in a bookshop. With so many titles on the shelves, you want yours to stand out.

It should be noted that I’m a writer, not an artist or a designer. So, with that in mind, I’ve included two covers – one is concept art created by my fiance as a favour, and the other is something I mashed together myself when I wanted a new ‘clean-cut’ look. It’s hard to settle on what I truly want, really, and I believe that if I ever get to the stage of publishing my book with a company, I will defer to their expertise.

In the meantime…

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Week 29 | Guest post: Get a friend who is familiar with your novel to speak about it

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Week 29

This week, I (somewhat nervously) hand the reins over to my writing partner, S.E. Berrow, who is both one of my closest friends and greatest WIP critics.

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Week 28 | Tell us about… sports in your book

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Week 28

What a perfect time for a sports post! By sheer happenstance, this week’s question coincides with England facing down Croatia for a place in the 2018 World Cup Final, so what better time to embrace the topic? (**whispers** It’s coming home…) [Update: It did not, in fact, come home.]

The Seelie Court, like any society, has its own sports and entertainment, uniquely tailored to the abilities of its Fae inhabitants. The games range from the small, day-to-day sports, played by Fae children: catch; various races – on foot, by wing; to the seasonal: ice skating, snow battles etc., which are enjoyed by the community.

There is also a renowned tri-annual competition called the Solstice Games – featuring something called the Gauntlet – that I will be focusing on today.

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Week 27 | Your favourite location in your novel

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Week 27My favourite location in the Seelie Court (I’ll save my favourite UnSeelie location for if and when we ever make it over the border…) is the Circle of Knowledge.

Run by Madam Sage Begonia, it is in essence a huge library built into the underside of the Hill of Tara. It contains volumes on every subject you could imagine, from Fae and human history (told from a Fae perspective) to the inner workings of Faerie science, including magical botany and the ingredients for numerous, specific healing potions. Continue reading